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[Dungeon Sweet Dungeon]

Is this a demo?

I can't beat it, even when I use all gold on the first? level. I read the instructions, but I don't seem to get it. What are you supposed to do?

bonisol responds:

Try buying a level 3 trap and a few monsters right at the beginning, and place a 10 gold treasure. Level 1 villagers shouldn't be too difficult to beat.

[-> PANCAKES!!! <-]

Hahaha nice.

This is fun game to chill out on. Good music choice too.

Great job!

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

THANKS! AND THE MUSIC OS THE BOMB.

[MetalSlug: BattleCreator2]

Another piss poor game.

You should fix your AS so that I can put as many sprites in the screen as possible.

munch-monster responds:

That would make the file size so unbeleavably big!

[The Big Fat Musical Box]

This is pretty nifty.

I never would of thought of it. I can't really think of too much more to add, maybe a few more genres or black metal.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

I am adding more genres in my second version.

[Create a Gun V2]

Small list of suggestions.

But first, it doesn't need a reset button. You just put the pieces back. It's not that hard. Jesus.

Here we go:

- The most important thing you need to upgrade is the drag and drop. Instead of having only one of each part, it should automatically duplicate and the depth should also become the highest one on click, but when you click on the duplicated MC, it wouldn't duplicate anymore just adjust the depth to the highest, that way no matter what you click on, it's will be on top.
- Backgrounds.
- Adjustments, such as: changing the length, height, flip, rotate, alpha, etc. This would also require a delete button so you're not cluttered with duplicated MC's.
- I noticed that the screen is huge. You can overcome this by organizing it with scroll bars or whatever.
- Save feature that's similar to punk-o-matic. so that everyone can see your gun. That and another save feature where it's saves on your comp in the flash folder, so you can save like 10 different guns. Then show case them in whatever background.
- The sounds should be able to move, drag over their area. That way when you click on that part of the gun, the sound goes off.
- Keyboard controls with finer movement. That way you can click on the part, drag it near, then use the keyboard to get to the appropriate area.
- Color customization. I think there is a way that AS can change colors, but also put some desert camo, digital camo, jungle camo, etc. Paint jobs.
- Other customizations too, such as double ducted ammo thing, hand grips, better looking laser colors, silencers, bayonets, etc.
- Menu. In the menu, you would have options, create a gun, credits, load/save, etc.
- Feature where you can click and hold and drag the mouse to select several parts to move around or whatever.
- Another feature where you can lock all the selected pieces together. Move them around as one.
- If you need more guns, go to madnesscombat.net and check out there resources forums, when it gets back online.
- Music box with at least 10 different tracks.
- Label the sound clips. That or when you highlight the sound clip, it gives you the name of the clip.
- Empty bullets. That would cool to put on the ground.
- Damage. Like a dent or rust or something to make them look realer.
- You frame speed needs to be at least 20 fps for the NG logo to work.
- What about futuristic weapons such as lasers and shit?
- Chainsaw? You should put more "other" add on's in there such as: swords, mini-gun, lawn mower, etc.
- Rifles, shotguns, double barrel shotguns, bolt action, elephant gun, punt gun, etc.
- Need more micro machine guns.
- More belt fed ammo designs, such as dual.
- Canons? Of sorts, of coarse.
- Mix all the ammo in one.
- Flashlight, grenades duct taped the side.

If I have any more ideas, I'll write 'em as a comment.

desertthunder responds:

Quote From corpsegr1nder:

"Holy fuck that Tivaelydoc kid has a lot to bitch about."
I agree. Either keep it to your self, or make your own Gun Creator.

VERY good comments though...

If you could help me with those. then plz msg me back!

[Stickman Madness 3]

List of things this game is missing.

- More violence. The blood should stick to the ground.
- Wayyyy more guns. Classify them too. Half a dozen pistols, several rifles, 2 or 3 snipers, a couple of shotguns including a saw'd off, 20-30+ different machine guns (uzi, ump, mac 10, m16, etc.), heavy machine guns like the gatling gun or m60, rocket launchers, SAM guns, RPG, grenade launchers, flamethrower, and more specialty weapons (freezegun, death ray, etc.).
- More grenade upgrades. Upgrade grenades to molotovs, c4, tnt, etc. That and the max grenades should be upgradeable. Maybe some animation of the throwing of the grenades.
- Better tower upgrades. Upgrade the building and it actually changes. Add barricades and other blockables.
- Random system of units to buy. Instead of fixed attributes, they vary every time you click on recruit, with the price matching the skills. Also, depending on the tower upgrade, the max troops should max out adjacently. If your tower has been upgraded, you should be able to hold 8, etc.
- Your troops should be able to change the weapon, which is if you don't implement the random selection.
- Boss levels every 10 levels.
- Definitely need to increase the max levels to at least 100, but personally I would say 500. To prevent lag, you could simply cut out some of the easier targets at the later levels. That or endless mode.
- XP system for the user and the troops. More kills, more xp.
- Troops should be able to get killed if enemies get too close.
- Music selection.
- You should be able to pick up dropped gold and enemy weapons
- Award system which unlocks bonus troops, weapons, etc.
- More enemies. SWAT would be a good example. Helicopters, suicide bombers, etc.
- Maybe a mode to send out your own troops.
- Sandbox mode?
- Cheats.
- In game upgrades.
- Mines and other traps.
- Barricades to slow down the enemy.
- The ability to shoot off limbs.
- Extra money for headshots.
- More sound effects (BOOM! headshot, COMBO!).
- Accuracy bonus.

smith1302 responds:

Wow thats a big list! This is a flash game not cod4 =P
But many of those do have a good point, thanks

[Modern Tactics 3]

Boring crappy game.

Dozens of glitches, but the worst one is when you kill all the enemies and it crashes your browser. That one is a must.

Wayyyy too repetitive. Need a lot more guns and shit, but they shouldn't be free. You should have to earn money to buy them.

Not too much different from the last one, which sucked just as bad.

I do like the different difficulty, so I'll give it a one.

1/10
0/5

lautan responds:

Thanks for favouriting my game!

[Law of the West Pinball]

You should really take note from other pinball gam

There is so much you are missing and need, play Windows Pinball or whatever and take notes.

Squize responds:

Thanks, I'll take that on board.

And thanks for the impressive 0. It's good to know that the game has no merit what so ever. Nothing. Obviously not one thing about it didn't make you feel ill.

I could have saved 6 weeks of my life, and uploaded a blank swf to receive the same amount from you, which is something else I'll take on board.

[Tank_Defense]

Totally sucked.

- The fact that you can't go diagonally kind of ruined the game.
- Bullets are way off and shitty looking and monotonous.
- Shit for upgrades. What about armor, different bullets, power-ups, etc. There is so much more you could of put to make it look at least like a signature game, but now it looks like a crappy tutorial.
- More music, just because that one keep looping and pissing me off.
- This might be a stretch, but what about levels? You could have as many waves as you want per level, but at least change the scenery and types of tanks.
- Randomness would break the singularity. After playing this game so throughly, I figured out where everybody would be.
- Save mode.
- Options menu. You can put difficulty, quality, save/load, unlockables or achievements, cheats, credits, etc.
- What about effects? Smoke trails, burned ground, something. It's just so plain.
- I think personally what would be cool is tank upgrades such as speed, armor, different and faster bullets. At the same time, the graphics get upgraded too. That would be cool.
- Fuck MochiAds.
- Do the badges actually do anything?
- Tank colors. If anything, please make more colors either random or availible. Many different types of starting tanks and as you progress farther, better tanks get unlocked. Or better parts such as wheels, canon, plating, etc.
- More sound effects. Especially on the main menu. Graphics and better OnDown effects would be cool.
- The way your tanks shoot look like shit too, bullet just magically appears, retarded. The bullet should come out of the canon. Maybe you could layer it that way or something.

Ok, I'm all done reviewing it. I just really can't stand your game at all. Complete trash.
0/5 and 0/10.

twistedduck responds:

Thank you very much for this feedback - I really appreciate it, and it will come in very handy for any future games I make.

[Jack Nicholson Soundboard]

Just one bug.

The "Laughing (long) was the wrong sound clip. I think.

dannik001 responds:

yeah i realised